Synthster vs. Haufareno, Battle of the Fonz Part II (Version 2.0)


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#1 synth
06-19-2006, 10:25 PM
so here it is to go along with the trend of the day of doing 1 vs. 1's. para tres puntos! FIESTA!!!

I am a living boy [sic]

The following is a public service announcement,
A warning to the narrator:

Curled down braids and split burning ends
Arms wrapped around the Willamette?s bends,
On a rock surrounded by trepidation
Laying [sic], a living boy,
Laying sick, me,

For I remember
She touched me here, she held me here,
I kissed her here, I loved her here,
But now she isnt here... and
I never forget a face.

[Nature, o brilliant nature!
Fate, O brilliant fate!
Is it raining? Is it pouring?
Yes, and the moon is telling
Me time is waning]

I remember I swung as I embraced her heart and
She sang me down from drowning art
I floated ?round her breasts and?
I touched her here, I loved her here,
I hugged her here, I kissed her here.

[So burn this rock whilst I dance around!
Tumble me through this hymnal?s sound!
Just please, save me this disease?
I think I can win this time.]

I giggled, frowned, I lived in air, and
We floated there? We hung in nothingness?
And we played our taught net of safety
With a bow of burning horsehair.
We played here, We died here?

[Nature, o brilliant nature!
Fate, O brilliant fate!
Is it raining? Is it pouring?
Yes, and the moon is telling
Me time is waning]

She?s dead... who are you?

[Just a rapping on your window late at night]

She died in chapter two? is it raining?

[Yes]

Then you shall take her place.

It is forever raining.


Visions of You

When the moon sets low
And the spirits feel warm
I put my hands in my pockets,
And begin to walk the around

I thought there was more
But I?m always so uncertain
Many people come and go
But I was always hoping you would be there

And as the cold steel rain comes down on my face
I stop and pause,

And know that now,
It?s time to go home

I see your face
Painted in the oil puddle canvas
I see your smile
Hanging above me in the clouds

Sad eyes and broken dreams
Red eyes, and melancholy thoughts
Sitting in a cold damp room
My only company is remnants of you

And as the cold steel rain comes down on my face
I stop and pause,

And know that now,
I?m all alone

I close my eyes as I drift in circles
I see you under my eye lids
(heh) Just you and I
Just you and I, sitting

Everything seems so broken
The illuminated room where you and I,
Where you and I first touched
Is dark

But wait a second,

Don?t I know you?
I see you, I see you in the corner!
But now you?ve faded
And I?ve fallen back into despair

And as the cold steel rain comes down on my face
I stop and pause,

And know that now,
You?re really gone


O, and **** the Police!

Hauf
06-19-2006, 10:26 PM
Hey atleast there is a poll in the 2.0 thread

Oh... wait

lol

#1 synth
06-19-2006, 10:27 PM
I fixed it, I fixed it, keep your pants on... or dont :liplick:

Hauf
06-19-2006, 10:29 PM
haha, I'm way ahead of you on not keeping them on :bounce:

guitar?
06-19-2006, 10:36 PM
I liked the second one. But the first one was great!

Final
06-19-2006, 10:38 PM
First.

#1 synth
06-26-2006, 03:46 AM
just a bump for any last minute voters out there, 1 day left

Burning_Angel
06-26-2006, 06:48 PM
first.