Trigster 4.0 vs Danteronno


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TrigFunction
06-22-2006, 11:28 PM
Landmines and Tripwires

Ive become a broken tread gliding
over landmines and trip wires.
Hoping to step my way over the radiating
destiny from the starless sky
covered by clouds and moisture's lies.
And with crashing waters and ravenous tides
stifiled by forceful failures and arguments belide
I'm silenced, now stricken, with the constraints of religion.

Harbors of faces with veils of blackness
consecrating superiority from the tired deserts
And there we laid under the fatigue ridden sky,
basking in the styles of red and white giants,
and the neon glow from the symmetrical insects.
While laden with designs of perpetual emotion,
we stared at what we thought was small
and wondered if we could ever be greater.

Avaritia

Lust, coaxed in viridian desire,
Intimate indulgence,
Sex smells like a new car,
Progression depends,
On when you die,
A cycle of sin,
Disentomb dead presidents,
Saturate within,

My scarlet imbued hands,
Is not proof that I killed him,
For I am not the culprit,
I am the victim.

Lay your head upon the ground,
Feel your phantom ignite,
Sapphire lips, and aureate mind
Your acts are coming full circle.

I pray for deliverance,
A mere fresh start,
I ask for revival,
I really did care for you,
Slightly?
I know my lesson now,
Give me life?

sorry danter i used my new one... you know your piece is good :P i gotta compete

DanteR*
06-22-2006, 11:30 PM
damn... oh well... better pull up my multiple accounts for this one ;)

TrigFunction
06-22-2006, 11:38 PM
haha :P

btw i really like the

sex smells like a new car line
thats awesome
thumps up


neato gang

Final
06-23-2006, 12:59 AM
First.

Green_Fox
06-23-2006, 09:38 AM
Red :|

The Hurt Within
06-23-2006, 09:53 PM
1st.

The second lacks focus.

TrigFunction
06-24-2006, 04:57 PM
hmm 2-2

anymore votes so this doesnt end as a tie?

#1 synth
06-24-2006, 05:01 PM
yes.

Jammydude44
06-24-2006, 05:01 PM
Red :)

#1 synth
06-24-2006, 05:06 PM
Tie :p:

TempoTantrum
06-25-2006, 02:10 AM
I guess I forgot to hit "reply" cause I thought I already posted this but alright:

I basically voted red because this...

"My scarlet imbued hands,
Is not proof that I killed him,
For I am not the culprit,
I am the victim."


...sounded like something I wish I wrote [basically because it sounds like alot of my other stuff scribbled on napkins i have lying around] and for that reason I like the red lyrics a whole lot more.

don't get me wrong though, blue, your's were awesome too

TrigFunction
06-25-2006, 03:33 PM
any more votes?

DanteR*
06-25-2006, 11:41 PM
I already posted in the Points thread about the 4 points and all that Jazz.... this was pretty surprising.

#1 synth
06-25-2006, 11:59 PM
damn, that was a close one