xArCaDiAx vs. Something_Vague (The Showcase Of The Immortals Part III (or IV)?)


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xArCaDiAx
07-05-2006, 11:32 PM
Ok, well, here we go again.

Two different styles.
Two veteran UG'ers.
Two and one half years of friendship, mentoring, and competion.
One more battle.

Best of luck to you bud.

Please vote.



Something_Vague's Entry (Matt)
[HOPE]


Vermillion smoke plumes grew as the
Hearts of a thousand children burst
From the gunmetal that the factories
Percolated in the polite winter.
A single girl longed to find the beach
That engulfed the Atlantic coast, She
Sat on twisted lawn chairs that sunk
Beneath the dazzling jeweled sand,
Her eyes choked on the filigree salts
That bled into the leukocyte ocean.

My letters read like fevers that dripped
Woven gestures of a milk white laughter.
They clamoured and spoiled into blank stares
That lingered in this impetuous night.
A bulimuc sunrise vomits ashtray indignities,
They coagulate on the interstate's violet waves,
She soaked into the nicotine dream and let her
Body become an addiction to boys that pumped
Battery acid through their blistered blue veins.

She read those telegrams like a snare drum,
Her voice, gutted, by her nape and lips.
Whispering crescendos on box car doors,
She fled into the piano stringed morning,
And grew silverleaf feathers that leaked
The acrid smell of a lustful and vengeful hope.
Her knuckles had burst from the cocaine toned skin
That had bubbled because of the lack of oxygen,

And she was the dusk and like a theif or a comet,
Flew past and glittered through the atmosphere,
As a satelight would penetrate spiderwebs, she spoke,
Of hope.

VS.


xArCaDiAx Entry (Nelson)
Well Best Friends Means...: Part 1
Fabula Nova Crystallis

I'm nervous.
Anxiety has swept over my entire body, like the Earth was going through a constant phase of "spring-cleaning."
I have just noticed the most beautiful girl I had ever seen.
Yes, it's a cliche. But you would have said the same thing if you peered from behind my eyelids.
Like the children hanging over the glass barrier at the pet store.
Just wanting to grab at the group of puppies, but whose arms were too short to run their fingers through the fur.
I was ecstatic, though shy. In fact, I was the most shy I had ever been in my life.
But she was the most beautiful girl I had ever seen.
And I wish I could have recorded that moment, before my memory ran out of battery.

But through the blue, steel door I found 16 steps.
And little did I know that I would have to pass the trial of them all, before being able to receive my verdict
Of whether or not anything would work out.
I never worked out.

Though, that never affected her. And I thought, something could happen.
Though, she was attached to another by the ankle. And it seemed, as if she wore the key to release the bond around her neck.
Though, I was sinking deeper and deeper into a quicksand of instances that I wish I could have taken back.
And the whole time, I loved to hate to love every minute of it.
Though, I only paid attention to the hours.
As the seconds, willingly, tied me down.

Her blonde hair whispered something that I could never accurately make-out. How I wanted to just make-out.......
Those words.
And her green eyes were cut just like the finest emeralds, sculpting envy and greed amongst my passion.

But I never heeded to the warnings.
Because I always thought I'd be ready to hide underneath my emotional desk.
The top made out of the cheapest wood, but engraved with the most expensive tools, forming the letters.

"K.J."

Though, they never explained to me why. When this atomic bomb of a situation would be dropped upon my third-world mind.
How a wooden desk would save me. When it would eventually...definitely be set aflame.
And I thought, that as long as I could gaze into those emerald eyes. I would willingly burn-alive forever.

pixiesfanyo
07-05-2006, 11:33 PM
blues.

xArCaDiAx
07-05-2006, 11:34 PM
Blues. Because its his best.

frd_marshll
07-05-2006, 11:38 PM
this is going to be a good one

DanteR*
07-05-2006, 11:51 PM
Blue

Final
07-06-2006, 12:48 AM
Sizzecondzizzles.

Jammydude44
07-06-2006, 12:34 PM
First one :)

TrigFunction
07-06-2006, 11:10 PM
seconded

Dashboard89
07-07-2006, 04:37 PM
OOhhgoshhh. I don't knowww. I really don't. Matts was brilliant, but I loved Nelsons too!

My vote goes for purple..

Retribution
07-08-2006, 05:46 PM
You probably shouldn't put who each one's by... just because, well, people can get biased.

xArCaDiAx
07-08-2006, 05:51 PM
Meh. Oh well. It had it for 18 votes, so...meh Ill do it anyway, who cares ;).

xArCaDiAx
07-09-2006, 12:13 AM
GG Matt.

Told you ;).

But Im glad we went with our best, twas a good match.

EDIT: ****KKKK 1 Guy voted for me with 0 posts meaning fake account :(. Oh well, so its a 10-10 tie. GG Mattttttttjew indeed.

DanteR*
07-09-2006, 12:19 AM
GG Matt.

Told you ;).

But Im glad we went with our best, twas a good match.

EDIT: ****KKKK 1 Guy voted for me with 0 posts meaning fake account :(. Oh well, so its a 10-10 tie. GG Mattttttttjew indeed.

it could be someone that only posts in the pit...

xArCaDiAx
07-09-2006, 12:22 AM
No, I mean, he has 0 posts period.

So Ill be a man and reduce it to a 10-10 tie.

DanteR*
07-09-2006, 12:24 AM
No, I mean, he has 0 posts period.

So Ill be a man and reduce it to a 10-10 tie.

hmm... someone like that voted for Iron X Maiden in the one on one I have going now.... o_O

xArCaDiAx
07-09-2006, 12:24 AM
Could it be that he has 2 accoutns?

DanteR*
07-09-2006, 12:26 AM
I don't think so... but it could be a possibility...

xArCaDiAx
07-09-2006, 12:35 AM
Well, it is the same account....the one that voted for me and the one that voted for Maiden. Im not saying he's cheating..but its just a speculation.

Mascot
07-11-2006, 08:58 PM
:haha

My mistake guys, was deleting the flamming posts, but forgot to uncheck the unflamming ones above it. . . :p:

Everything should be good now.