Pumpkins_Rule Vs. Fate_of_Mind


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Fate_of_Mind
08-01-2006, 11:11 AM
~This is a two point battle~

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Jenny pt. 2 by Pumpkins_Rule

It's the first step to freedom
It's the first awakening soul over a new day
I can't believe how cold it's become
As we dig into our old ones
Our old black weather vests
Pacified by the pouring rain
Running parallel to tracks of trains
Frame


Fold and be held by it
Breathe and perspire through your veins
Clammy and damp and full of
Loneliness
Sometimes it helps to behold loneliness
So that you know that you are never alone
You are never alone


You are never full of anything quite like home
Quite like the sheets with whom you decided to sleep
Slipping away to the moon
And once you?re back you find it?s too soon
Because you left in April and came back before Noon
It?s a straightaway getaway that promises to roam
Over the heavens and maelstroms you keep beside you
You keep in the loneliness shackled to the deck
Frame by frame
You blink and it rains
You wince and there?s pain
You brake

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Revolution and Execution by Fate_of_Mind

Voices running through my head
Chanting over the fallen dead
Voices calling for another day
Trying to find another way

I will not fall victim to this blood money

(Chorus)
I see the bits and pieces
Fall from my severed soul
The tattered and the torn
Rotting away as the day grows old

To the fire!
To the bloodshed!
Through the mire!
Through the burning lead!

(Chorus)
I see the bits and pieces
Fall from my severed soul
The tattered and the torn
Rotting away as the day grows old

Herding the sheep
And assembling the masses
Not a moment to sleep
As your pedestal crashes

Descend into the great beyond
Where there is no longer a light to guide you
Descend into the great beyond
Where there is no longer a voice to guide you

(Chorus)
I see the bits and pieces
Fall from my severed soul
The tattered and the torn
Rotting away as the day grows old

(Chorus)
I see the bits and pieces
Fall from my severed soul
The tattered and the torn
Rotting away as the day grows old

Revolution and execution
Forever the resolution [x3]

Do not deny
The lies you hold so dear
Do not deny
The face that brings you fear

(Chorus)
I see the bits and pieces
Fall from my severed soul
The tattered and the torn
Rotting away as the day grows old

Never again [x4]

Never?

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The Moogle
08-01-2006, 03:22 PM
I really didn't like the imagery from the second...no, it wasn't nice, I didn't like that at all...:(
Kupo, I will have to pick the first one.

Final
08-01-2006, 05:49 PM
Bleh, first, I guess.