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rabidguitarist
08-27-2006, 11:45 AM
Perspective

"i would love to catch you up; on that date"
thats what shed do, thats what she said
we all know that she; is a liar
but you cant trust yourself when your around her

she said her options were; on the inbetween
but ive never seen you so unhappy
i would help you but its not my objective
time to change it all, time to change perspective

you know your too scared to; to ask him out
but in your mind you know: not a better boy around
when your walking up all in the gym
you know you cant trust yourself when your around him

he said you were his best, whod have guessed
but ive never seen you so depressed
i would help you but its not my objective
time to change it all, time to change perspective

if i knew that you cared
i would not have been, your worst enemy
now that your head's full of air
i wont think twice, of throwing you on the street
and now i think, of a good place
and now those memories are all erased

that was a story of a boy and a girl
and she turned him down in his own little world
and now hes depessed, knowing its for the best
now he found the perfect girl, to rule his little world

That was a story how a girl found a boy
in his little world they were both overjoyed
she found a boy and he found a girl
they live happily in their own little world


heartbreak should not be such a charade

im flailing and spluttering for words i cant find
im lost in the clutter of my own mind
i have no way to describe my position
searching for loopholes in my own decision

but heartbreak should not be such a charade
for every bond you break, another is made
for every bridge that you snap, and place that you trap
another way rises to fill up the gap

i can feel your essence entwining my soul
and that is the feeling that makes me feel whole
a yearning for homeland that is my calling
trying to get back, stalling, falling and crawling

after all, love is only word that we say
and cannot be emotion, or a price that we pay
defining the actions and choices we take
or forming and breaking the bonds that we make

so to sum it all up and to find a conclusion
it seems that emotions are just an illusion
made to cause rifts in our lives and others
and to disguise the fact were all sisters and brothers

visionofadream
08-27-2006, 05:31 PM
I like the red one myself, but there both very good, keep up the good work. :)

Grab For Life
08-27-2006, 11:36 PM
wow
your kicking my ass
haha

hope i get a vote

rabidguitarist
08-28-2006, 12:04 PM
hmm

i didnt know how long the poll was meant to be for, so i set it for 5 days.

which leaves 4.