Technical Death Intro (PTB)


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*'-'*
10-01-2006, 09:18 PM
Here is a technical death intro i made up in about twenty minutes. The reason im posting this before its even close to being finished is because im unsure where to go with it. so if you could crit it, but also tell me where you think i could take it that'd be great. crit for crit if you leave a link too.

Burning_Angel
10-02-2006, 12:59 AM
oh my lord. that was beautiful.

Excellent so far.

Nunwhxre 666
10-02-2006, 06:17 AM
Pretty good. The bass was excellent. Good job.
Crit mine? It's in my sig.

saddam
10-02-2006, 03:50 PM
i liked it, but it sounded way to much like a necrophagist ripoff.

*'-'*
10-02-2006, 07:38 PM
i liked it, but it sounded way to much like a necrophagist ripoff.

Yeah you're right i reckon. It is really hard to right original songs in the technical death genre as i am sure that you of all people are aware. And when can i expect a new song from you?

Edit: I have worked on this some more. still not completlely finished i'll probably add a solo after where its at now

Billy Talented
10-02-2006, 09:36 PM
I liked it alot and the bass line was awesome, the only thing that got me was on bars 32 -34 i thought that the notes were just a little bit too fast to do w/o slides or hammerons/pulloffs

other than that great job

Burning_Angel
10-03-2006, 06:31 PM
Amazing yet again. I can see you are trying your hardest to immitate Nile. jk, but it was that good.

*'-'*
10-03-2006, 06:48 PM
Amazing yet again. I can see you are trying your hardest to immitate Nile. jk, but it was that good.

Thanks mate i really appreciate it

RedDeath9
10-03-2006, 09:36 PM
It was alright, I didn't really like the last bar of the intro, the one with the hammer-ons and pulloffs. I really like when the bass comes in, it sounds pretty cool. Didn't really like bar 44 - 47 (or 48?), try adding some different timings into there, and some pinch harmonics. Overall it was alright. 7.5/10. I'm into tech metal, but it felt like something was missing. It'd probably sound a lot better with drums and vocals though.

Crit mine? It's in the sig.

Csquared1001
11-04-2006, 11:11 PM
that was pretty good. I like the bass. 7.5/10

crit mine? (http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=460529)

Quik Axe Player
11-07-2006, 11:10 AM
That was terrible. It bad my ears bleed badly.

*'-'*
11-08-2006, 03:04 AM
That was terrible. It bad my ears bleed badly.

Thankyou

gutsman
11-08-2006, 09:15 AM
Yeah it probably won't win the award for most emotional song ever written. But I can enjoy it very much the it should be; as a brutal head banging death metal piece. nice work.