[PTB, MIDI] A Song For Microsoft


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Fallenblood
10-06-2006, 12:37 PM
Here's an almost complete song by me. Would you give me some criticism on it?:)

Spark1284
10-07-2006, 01:27 AM
its really all over the place, i think u tried to get too fancy with it instead of just writing for what the song needed. the main riff really isnt that good and the rhythm is a little unsettling. the piano also has to go, but i did however like the way the rhythm in the 5th and 6th bar went together. really cool. id simplify it a little more and work more on the generally riffing right now

Fallenblood
10-07-2006, 10:34 AM
Thanks. The piano is supposed to sound like that, though.