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Oasis-fanatic
10-08-2006, 02:07 PM
Hey wassup everyone heres a song im working on which his metally hendrix style if that makes sense.......well please crit. Ta

Tuning:Half step down or normal. (Whatever rocks your boat)

Intro part 1

e|--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------0-2---2b4r0-----------------12-14--14b16r14-(14)-12-----|
D|-----------------------0-2--------------------0-2---2/14--------------------------------------|
A|-----------------0-2-----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
E|--12/0---0-3-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------|

fast fingerpicking

e|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---15p12------15p12-------15p12-----------15b17-(17)----------|
G|------------14------------14------------14-----------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|

e|--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------0-2---2b4r0-----------------12-14--14b16r14-(14)-12-----|
D|-----------------------0-2--------------------0-2---2/14--------------------------------------|
A|-----------------0-2-----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
E|-----------0-3-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------|

e|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-5-5-5-2-----------------------------------------------------------------|
A|-5-5-5-2-----------------------------------------------------------------|
E|-3-3-3-0-----------------------------------------------------------------|

Intro part 2

e|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|----------------------------------------------------15b17 (17)---------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9-----------------------------| 3 times
A|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9-----------------------------|
E|-0---(0)-(0)--3---(3)--(3)---5-5-5--x--7-----------------------------|

e|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9~~~9-9-9/14------------|
A|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9~~~9-9-9/14------------|
E|-0---(0)-(0)--3---(3)--(3)---5-5-5--x--7~~~7-7-7/12------------|

Verse 1

e|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|--2xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx----------------------------------| This = Riff blah blah
A|--2xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx----------------------------------|
E|--0xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx----------------------------------|

I've got nothing to say to you

e|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9-----------------------------|
A|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9-----------------------------|
E|-0---(0)-(0)--3---(3)--(3)---5-5-5--x--7-----------------------------|


RIFF BLAH BLAH WITH THESE WORDS BELOW

I hate the stench of your...attitude

e|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9-----------------------------|
A|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9-----------------------------|
E|-0---(0)-(0)--3---(3)--(3)---5-5-5--x--7-----------------------------|


RIFF BLAH BLAH AGAIN

I'd love to say that i...told you so

e|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9-----------------------------|
A|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9-----------------------------|
E|-0---(0)-(0)--3---(3)--(3)---5-5-5--x--7-----------------------------|

RIFF BLAH BLAH

But i'm a..fraid its time for..me to go

e|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9-----------------------------|
A|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9-----------------------------|
E|-0---(0)-(0)--3---(3)--(3)---5-5-5--x--7-----------------------------|

Pre-Chorus

e|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-14--------------12------------------------------------------------------|
A|-14-(8 times)--12-(8 times)------------------------------------------|
E|-12--------------10------------------------------------------------------|
(Tell)
(Lyrics) Its a long story to teeeeell

e|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-14--------------12------------------------------------------------------|
A|-14-(8 times)--12-(8 times)------------------------------------------|
E|-12--------------10------------------------------------------------------|
(Hell)
That im a..down here in heeeeeell (Oh yeah)

e|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9-----------------------------|
A|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9-----------------------------|
E|-0---(0)-(0)--3---(3)--(3)---5-5-5--x--7-----------------------------|

Chorus

e|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-14--------------12------------------------------------------------------|
A|-14-(8 times)--12-(8 times)------------------------------------------|
E|-12--------------10------------------------------------------------------|

I'm on the rooooooooad to hell

e|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-14--------------12------------------------------------------------------|
A|-14-(8 times)--12-(8 times)------------------------------------------|
E|-12--------------10------------------------------------------------------|

(I said i'm on the)
I'm on the rooooooooooooad to hell

e|----------------------------------------------------12-----(12)-----------|
B|----------------------------------------------------15b17 (17)---------|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9-----------------------------|
A|-2---(2)-(2)--5---(5)--(5)---7-7-7--x--9-----------------------------|
E|-0---(0)-(0)--3---(3)--(3)---5-5-5--x--7-----------------------------|



Solo 1 after this but i' working on that so i'll tab it out another time

Sorry i cant do it in thingy, guitar pro or w/e i dont know how to, so only constructive critting plz :no: Cheers.

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METSOAD
10-08-2006, 02:19 PM
looks cool, would sound good in straight d

ripewithdecay
10-08-2006, 02:21 PM
the first part of the intro looks pretty sweet, the rest is just eh.

Oasis-fanatic
10-08-2006, 02:25 PM
lol its not clear probably i wish i could use guitar pro thingy majiby

i mean powetab