Untitled Song [PTB + MIDI] - C4C


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Fatt Sorum
10-08-2006, 08:46 PM
Hey, this be a new song i wrote,
i've put it out on powertab, and i'll do it up on guitar pro later, as always - crit4crit

10-08-2006, 08:57 PM
It was alright, but got way too repetative. The intro was pretty cool, the verse was... alright, but nothing special. The repetativeness was the only thing that I didn't like about it, try adding a 3rd guitar for the 2nd verse and chorus, and definately the final chorus. 6.7/10. (Don't worry, I've never given a 10.) And I guess with drums it wouldn't be as repeatitive.

Crit mine? I'll get a link, hold on...



10-08-2006, 09:06 PM
i think it was good, but it dont deserve a 6 i think maybe a 7 an a half 8? pretty decent work man , maybe u could check out my new song element of destruction ?

10-09-2006, 01:53 AM
i enjoyed listening to it. it was pretty cool but i do agree that it was a bit repetative. i would still give it 7-8/10 or so. im sure could be an 8 easily with other instruments and lyrics, but the guitar work by itself sounded pretty awesome. well done

10-09-2006, 02:04 AM
yeah, nice work. it really says something when i listen to a song all the way through. i like how that main riff sounds like 3/4 + 5/4 rather than just your basic 4/4 riff. all in all, it was a little repetative, but that's really the easiest criticism to have. it definately needs some repetition. nice solo of course - looks like it took some thought. nice work. i'll definately check out your next song. maybe you'll want to try something more experimental?

10-09-2006, 02:48 AM
Woah dragonforce style

nice song

10-09-2006, 05:17 PM
really really cool man, yea its repetitive but i'd guess with drums and vocals no one would notice it, the solo was awsome, good work

10-09-2006, 06:46 PM
nice, the intro sounds cool, and i ke the melody too, but i have to agree about it being repetitive.

10-09-2006, 08:41 PM
sounded very "tears don't fall" but i liked it a lot. i give it a 8/10. you'd get a 9 if it was a bit more original.

crit mine? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=444287