Apathetic Vigil (GP5)


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nexteyenate
10-09-2006, 10:34 PM
This is a song i made when i was bored. I screwed up on bars 12-13 and im too lazy to go back and fix that but any other comments would be appreciated. thanks!

EDIT: added a unique bass line to bars 10-11. fixed chorus.

SGxMastodonxSG
10-10-2006, 10:30 PM
I enjoyed it. The harmonized solo part was really cool, I digged it. To me, at times it seemed a little boring, but overall I did enjoy it.

RedDeath9
10-10-2006, 10:45 PM
That was alright. Kinda sounds like Black Dahlia Murder, except a little bit too happy... Anyway, the first part of the intro was kind of boring, but when it starts harmonizing it sounds pretty cool. Bars 10-11 were kinda boring, try adding some sort of bass riff there. I liked the harmonizing again right after it. The chorus was alright, nothing too special though. Try adding a fast part to the solo, and add another guitar playing rythym. With just bass it sounds kind of dull. I liked how you did the outro part though.

7.5/10.

nexteyenate
10-11-2006, 06:57 AM
a fast part to the solo is almost impossible because the other guitarist in my band cant play fast at all and i cant play that fast either.

~DrEaM ThEaTeR~
10-11-2006, 04:21 PM
the harminization part was sweet as all hell.
crit mine?

my song (http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=444234)

Csquared1001
10-13-2006, 09:45 PM
I liked the intro, had a wierd feel too it, pretty sweet. The song kinda gets repetative though so try a key change or something. Also a solo would be a great addition. Otherwise good riffage.