Peaceful Predator (GP5) Crit Plz!


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nexteyenate
10-11-2006, 08:09 PM
This song started as an acoustic song with one guitar. I then added another acoustic guitar and then i added an electric guitar and altogether i thought it sounded fairly decent. I also tried out a bass solo and it sort of fit in there but i could take some suggestions on it. I realize that there is a weird part in the acoustic guitar solo but it doesnt sound that bad. Suggestions appreciated!

~DrEaM ThEaTeR~
10-12-2006, 04:11 PM
i thought this was very well done. the acoustic intro was really good. i like the little interlude at bar 9. the rythmn electric part got a little repetitive after a while but the high solo guitar part was good

Csquared1001
10-13-2006, 09:49 PM
As with your other song, the riffs kinda get repetative. Another thing, the intro wasn't very good, waaay too simple. fix these and your song will be better

nexteyenate
10-13-2006, 09:54 PM
well, I've only been playng guitar for about six months, so i don't want to make it dificult for me to play by making the intro more complicated. Also, rest assured, the riffs sound much better and somehow more varied with vocals. i realize that they are repetative, but i'll try to fix that with my next song.

nexteyenate
10-14-2006, 05:02 PM
I added a PTB version. The solo is kinda screwed up because i imported it from a midi file.

RedDeath9
10-14-2006, 07:09 PM
The intro wasn't too bad. But it did get kind of repetative. I really liked bars 48-63 (solo?) Yeah it was alright, 6.5/10. I never give out 10s though... so yeah...

Snipy
10-15-2006, 01:56 PM
I really liked the intro. I liked the solo aswell.
7/10

ShadowintheSun
11-13-2006, 04:42 PM
Apart from the final bar, which isn't good at all, i love this song, especially the acoustic guitars. 8.5/10

Crit mine? (http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=462170)

nexteyenate
11-14-2006, 10:34 PM
final bar is just supposed to be the part at the end of the song when i just scream out "Jam!" and my brother and i start playing really fast stuff. those sections are always more fun :)

6_6_6_1_syn
03-08-2007, 12:19 PM
I agree with everything said before...it was decent but there were a few repetative parts and small areas that should be fixed.

7/10

Pieceofmind019
03-10-2007, 06:33 PM
wow i really liked that it was catch the harmoneys and rythems were really good and i really liked all the acoustic parts it was upbeat and overall verywell writen the solo was nice and every noted seemed to serve a pupose

Overall very well done 9.5/10

Phill-Rock
03-20-2007, 04:49 PM
I really liked peaceful predator. I have good songs but i dont have the patience to tab them (plus paranoia someone will steal them)