[PTB] The Forest. (terrible name)


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10-12-2006, 02:30 AM
Hola. :D

This is the first song I've submitted here.

I wrote this a few days ago. You could play it on an acoustic, or a jazzy clean sound for an electric.

The name.. is crap. Don't worry about it.

Do you like it?
What could I have done to make it better?
Did you like the ending? Was it too sudden?

I'll crit for crit, baby.

10-12-2006, 02:51 AM
Dude, I got to say. I really enjoyed it. It was totally relaxing and calm, and it seemed like there was a cool new riff constantly springing up, but they all had a similar theme. I think it's amazing.


oh, and crti4crit? link in sig

10-12-2006, 03:07 AM
Thats neat. It also gave me a really cool idea. Thanks a lot.

10-12-2006, 06:23 PM
it had a nice, smooth flow to it. i enjoyed it, but the only problem was the ending. i don't know how exactly to describe it but it felt somewhat rushed. overall though, it was a great song.

10-13-2006, 12:03 AM
The ending seemed a bit rushed.

I loved it though. Beautiful.