[powertab, midi] melodic death metal song
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10-19-2006, 04:46 PM
this is the song ive been working on, its not great and some of the tansitioning is off, but its a start.
note: for best listening experience, stuff fingers into ears and shout "la la la la" when you get to the solo, i cant write lead for crap.
10-19-2006, 04:57 PM
pretty good but some riffs are repetative
10-19-2006, 05:16 PM
Your best riffs are by far the chorus and the preverse at measures 46. The intro got really repetitive, and i thought that lead thing for the first verse sounded bad.
All in all i enjoyedl istening to it though. That lead thing in the first verse made me want to stop listening to it at first though.
crit mine please?
10-20-2006, 02:40 PM
^ ouchies, i already crited yours, im the first response
10-20-2006, 03:09 PM
really? my bad :]
well i changed it so its a little different now, and it has some added riffs :3, but you dont have to crit it again.
i did that to 2 people so far :], sorry
10-20-2006, 04:42 PM
I think you have some awsome ideas laid out in there... they just need a little more life breathed into them... in other words: Don't repeat as much, and if you MUST, have a varying lead for each part. If you can add drums I'd love to hear it again... it'll sound much more like death metal than it actually does!
10-20-2006, 10:11 PM
The biggest thing I didn't like about it is that it's too repetative.
However, I did like the chorus riff a lot. I liked most all of the riffs actually, just some were repeated too much.
Did anyone else get a droning note after the first time through the first verse? Damn, that was annoying ...
Anyway, care to crit some of my stuff? May not be your style, but I would appreciate the comments, anyway. Links are in my sig.
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