Synthy tune


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10-19-2006, 09:32 PM
Hey everyone, this is, I think, the first full song I've ever written, and I definitely need some constructive criticism for it. I know some parts don't flow well, and I'd like some suggestions for them, too.

10-19-2006, 10:21 PM
I found the beginning to be sort of boring. Then it started getting interesting a little bit after the synth stuff. I liked a couple of the riffs in there a lot. I'd like to see some of your work in my "Create a song" thread.

There's a link if you're interested.

10-19-2006, 10:51 PM
i look at your avy of smashing pumpkins before listening to the song, now at the end i can see them playing this, good song, good song