Classic style rock song


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10-21-2006, 01:20 AM
I hope you like it, please welcome to tell me your suggestions.

10-21-2006, 12:41 PM
comon guys 42 views.....

10-21-2006, 04:12 PM
can you post a guitar pro version also?

10-23-2006, 12:09 AM
I didn't care for the crash cymbal on the eighth notes in the intro/refrain. I'd just make it on the quarter notes. It also sounds a bit cluttered in some spots for some reason.

I do like the guitar doing the fills, though. Sounds cool. Just make sure the fills go with the chords. I didn't sound like they did in a few spots. And what's with that little blub at the end? It kind of sounds like it wasn't meant to be there. Overall, nice song. Does have a classic rock feel to it.

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Fatt Sorum
10-23-2006, 02:34 AM
not bad, i think yor intro melody sounded out, watch the size of the bends.
chorus - not bad, keyboard and guitar sounded clashy though
bass- awesome through the song, kudos to you for that

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