S+L 4 Line Competition FINAL


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Jammydude44
10-22-2006, 05:50 PM
Right-

1st Place- 5 Points
2nd Place- 3 Points
3rd Place- 2 Points

PLEASE VOTE FOR YOUR FAVOURITE

There, no bitching about that, do as it says :D

Good Luck to All.


Down by MacDougal-- You flitting your eyes at me, sparks dancing out through the humid air and
Erupts into neon-bright fire flies, splashes the pavement and burns like the bridge between us
And I stand less straightly
Cause I bent myself backwards to cover this gap between you and me

Opens curtains kill awaiting dreams of love, sex, and home...

Grasping the edge of the winding metal parapet
Sketching neon breaths and incandescent eyes of the city
Those blinking pseudo suns speaking in exotic tongues
"Morse code's for suckers, Morse code's for suckers" they rant.


Every time I come to you
You fall in shock of what?s become of me
Anger is my attitude
And my sadness is you


Clenching weathered nails in my ceramic palm
As I grasp for oxygen, breathing you in;
Surfacing from the depths of the fluoride ocean calm
Bubbling with a million specks of interest

DanteR*
10-22-2006, 06:27 PM
Emerald

Jammydude44
10-23-2006, 07:05 AM
I'm with Green ^

Jamie

#1 synth
10-23-2006, 02:28 PM
*insert bitching here*

none of the four :p:

Dæmönika
10-23-2006, 03:00 PM
Green.

pixiesfanyo
10-23-2006, 03:13 PM
These suck.

Phoebus
10-23-2006, 03:24 PM
yeah....they do

but green

Dæmönika
10-23-2006, 03:36 PM
These suck.

You're not very likely to write a masterpiece in four lines.

Dirk Gently
10-23-2006, 03:46 PM
^ It doesn't help when they try their hardest to stuff as much pretentiousness into four lines as possible. I think it'd be better if they did 4/5 of a Limerick.

Anyway, Red. It gave me the smallest headache.

Dæmönika
10-23-2006, 04:07 PM
^ It doesn't help when they try their hardest to stuff as much pretentiousness into four lines as possible.

Yeah...but...b...how the hell do you have an answer for everything?

_Mayday_
10-23-2006, 04:22 PM
Yeah...but...b...how the hell do you have an answer for everything?

He's a lawyer, Satan himself gave him his degree.

Dæmönika
10-23-2006, 04:23 PM
He's a lawyer, Satan himself gave him his degree.

Satan's really not living up to his reputation these days...:sad:

_Mayday_
10-23-2006, 05:13 PM
Satan's really not living up to his reputation these days...:sad:

I forgot to mention, Dirk's actually got the Plague.

Dæmönika
10-23-2006, 05:14 PM
Ah, that's OK then.

Dirk Gently
10-23-2006, 05:16 PM
*cough*

Damn boils...

_Mayday_
10-23-2006, 05:46 PM
*cough*

Damn boils...


:haha

Anyways, on topic:

Green and Orange were too ...Blahh... and blue was too simple. Red was just right.

scousertommy
10-23-2006, 06:01 PM
I hate you all.

Except Mr Orange.
Boo-urns to all those 'primary' colours.

Phoebus
10-24-2006, 12:10 AM
that hurts ro. that hurts bad

scousertommy
10-24-2006, 04:17 AM
Okay, okay, except for Jay too. :)
But everyone else - feel my disdain!
Feel it!

Dirk Gently
10-24-2006, 09:18 AM
^ Alright.

I've felt bigger.

scousertommy
10-24-2006, 12:46 PM
You would have.



:)

Jammydude44
10-24-2006, 05:56 PM
Stop spamming my final.

Hrrmph.

Jamie

Phoebus
10-24-2006, 08:10 PM
bitches start votin

Jammydude44
10-27-2006, 06:39 AM
One final push for votes then....

Jamie

DanteR*
10-29-2006, 12:50 PM
C'mon Peeps, we need more votes...

Phoebus
10-29-2006, 02:41 PM
like three more for red.....yeah

DanteR*
10-29-2006, 03:05 PM
like seven more for orange.....yeah

I agree :)

Phoebus
10-29-2006, 10:12 PM
mehh...ill take second

caz_guitar_dude
10-30-2006, 11:58 AM
Green.

Jammydude44
10-30-2006, 12:26 PM
AND THE WINNER IS:

Alk 3 addict! With the green piece:


Opens curtains kill awaiting dreams of love, sex, and home...

Grasping the edge of the winding metal parapet
Sketching neon breaths and incandescent eyes of the city
Those blinking pseudo suns speaking in exotic tongues
"Morse code's for suckers, Morse code's for suckers" they rant.


So that is a nice 5 points for the winner there.

Second Place: Phoebus, gets 3 points.

Third Place: DanteR*, giving him 2 points.


Cheers to everyone who took part, I think this went well :D

Jamie