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Bodomizer
10-25-2006, 05:55 PM
3-0-9. what a great title right.. lol but, ya. i made a new song. Kinda In Flamesish. Please tell me what you think. Crit4crit. thanks.

Envion
10-25-2006, 06:58 PM
i liked it...but why didnt you include the power tab with the mp3? anyway...
the intro sounded alot like "smile in your sleep" by silverstien but other than that it was pretty awesome
loved the solo

Valo
10-25-2006, 07:15 PM
**** dude, I wanna learn howto play this. it's pretty damn awesome!

Bodomizer
10-25-2006, 08:54 PM
thanks alot. oh, and here's the gp4.. just dont rip it. :no: lol

Bodomizer
10-30-2006, 09:26 PM
ok. i know you're not supposed to do this.. but i've tried everything. I've done what i was told and i commented other peoples songs and asked them to crit mine.. but no one has. So please, more crits would be very appreciated.

RedDeath9
10-30-2006, 09:47 PM
Hm, it's alright. Not exactly my style though. I liked the intro, and the verse was also pretty good I guess. Didn't really like the 2 riffs after that though. I liked bar 19, but bar 20 didn't seem to fit. The second bar of the solo didn't seem to fit... Like it was out of scale, which it was. I don't know much music theory, but the 14 on the E, and the 16 on the D are supposed to be 13 and 15, because that's the scale that the rythym is playing... However I loved the rest of the solo.

Hm, 7.2/10. :)