Ginger, Ginger, Ginger


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10-28-2006, 05:39 PM
I decided to post another one so I could be elligle for le writer of the month.

Thanks for viewing everyone.

ginger, ginger, ginger,
geiser, geiser, liar, fighter.
the wooden heart of a pile of
driftwood was a gingersnap
to a young girl without lungs
to breathe. she sat on a lollipop
that erupted colors and flavors like
a cataract slipstream, a geiser...

a comatose catharsis
a comatose catharsis
opulent red
lips that beat down the sun's rays
like opulent red
lips, that open eyes
open eyes
open eyes
eyes closed eyes
see me
dissapear, dissapear, dissapear

10-28-2006, 05:43 PM
Umm...okay...? Definitely like the rest of your stuff. Went over my head or something because I do not at all get this.

10-29-2006, 04:06 PM

10-29-2006, 04:43 PM
that kind of reminds me of some of my own stuff cause its pretty sporatic and abstract. for me anyways, when i write something like that, its stuff that has meaning to me but maybe not to someone else, but also establishes the mood that i was in at the time, which is what the song is really meant to convey. im not really sure how you picture this, but i think its doing that pretty well, so this could come out good i guess depending on how you handle it musically. if you wanna check out any of mine their in my sig. the first two there are in progress still and the others are from like three months ago, but feel free to check them out and maybe leave crits for the ones im working on. thanks.