My first song..


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apc--ibanez
10-31-2006, 11:32 AM
Yeah basically did this the last couple of days, it sounds much better when I play it on guitar than guitar pro, in guitar pro it sounds a bit dodgy. But anyway check it out and let me know what you think, its not fully done but this is what I've done so far.

EDIT: and i will have a new version of this tomorow once I've finished with it

ouchies
10-31-2006, 04:17 PM
I dont really like the rhythm. Its not bad at all for a first song though. Keep writing and you will keep improving.

grampastumpy
11-03-2006, 12:58 AM
I'm with ouchies about the rhythm. Everything else does sound about right. All in key and stuff. Like he said, good first song, but it's just not unique. I know that since it's your first song that's not gonna be a main priority but yeah. Later on you might wanna branch off and do something else. Maybe something with more than one guitar.
(http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=458398)