Untitled (Guitar Pro 5)


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apc--ibanez
10-31-2006, 10:46 PM
New song I did (only my second so far)
Needs a bit of fixing I think, but I'll see what everyone thinks so far.

nexteyenate
11-02-2006, 04:07 PM
the opening riff is very cool but would sound much better with two guitars (if you know how to use thirds. if u dont, its alright as it is). the sliding part in the chorus kinda throws off the timing of the song. make the note that you slide to a fourth note and the problem will be fixed. overall, its kinda like "metalcore by numbers" in a sense. its very much your stereotypical metalcore song, but it has its good spots. good job. keep it up.

apc--ibanez
11-02-2006, 08:59 PM
cheers dude, yeah I know how to use thirds so I'll try that.