New Riff (GP5,MIDI) Crit 4 Crit


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Csquared1001
11-03-2006, 10:05 PM
Alright i need your opinions on this riff. Please be honest and provide constructive critism. Also please provide a link to the riff/song you want ME to crit. Thanks UGers :)

Leper Messiah
11-04-2006, 01:28 PM
i really liked tht second riff i liek the feel of it. but im not really digging the first one. Although it is ok leading into the 2nd riff

Csquared1001
11-04-2006, 01:36 PM
yeah the first few bars are meant to be with flanger and reverb but i can't get them on GP5

NovemberRain273
11-04-2006, 04:35 PM
Yea the second one is pretty cool, rmeinds me of somethying. bluesy rock. nice!

mind critting mine? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=460892

6_6_6_1_syn
11-04-2006, 04:55 PM
did like the 2nd part...often times i hear a rythym wrong and i things start to sound offbeat...thats what it seemed like, but it was most likely me because it was all in a common time

WOWdoritos
11-04-2006, 05:11 PM
thanks for helping me with the question and i liked your riff and i hope you dont mind but i modifyed it.....only for fun but i think it works , try it

Marv

*'-'*
11-05-2006, 04:34 AM
I quite like it. the second part after the slide from the 12th fret is really enjoyable. i agree with 6_6_6_1_syn that seems offbeat but that just because theres no drums. get some drums in there btw because it will sound awesome

GuitarManiac09
11-05-2006, 02:12 PM
i really liked tht second riff i liek the feel of it. but im not really digging the first one. Although it is ok leading into the 2nd riff
Basically what he said, the first is kinda bland, but the second riff has more stuff going on and is pretty cool.

OneShowmaster
11-05-2006, 06:23 PM
cool dude. I liked the second one alot. Thanks for the crit.

wasp2020
11-05-2006, 06:29 PM
Yeah, the second part's slides are great, the blues-rock style is very evident (but sitll has some extra flavour to it).

onebetter
11-07-2006, 04:38 PM
ya the first was just kinda the same thing over and over but the second riff had a real flavor to it, very blues rock, in your face attitiude kinda thing, if you know what i mean.

Black_Soad
11-10-2006, 10:13 PM
Didn't really like the first 4 bars much, the slide in the 5th bar was nice tho. I liked the rest of the riff, had that bluesy feel to it.

Heres my songs if you would like to have a look and crit :)

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=7266298#post7266298

starverse
11-20-2006, 05:18 PM
Pretty nice. It actually sortof reminded me of bands such as DIO and Primal Fear.


Crit Mine? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=468280 ;)