Finished Synth/Rock song [Ptab]


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altosaxgeek5
11-06-2006, 09:07 PM
So, here it is, my first finished song.. yay for me. Constructive criticism is welcome, of course, and I promise to not get whiney and flamey if you decide to totally bash my song.

Spark1284
11-07-2006, 05:57 PM
great riffs and compostition, but its the same riff overrr and overrr and overrrr, bridge? interlude? anything at all to change it up would be nice

cool#9
11-07-2006, 06:28 PM
Have you posted this before, because i've definatly heard this before? Either way its still good.

altosaxgeek5
11-07-2006, 10:51 PM
^^It is repetitive, so I'll try to work in an interlude.
^ Yes, I have posted it before, but it's gone through some changes since before.

altosaxgeek5
11-09-2006, 08:55 PM
Here it goes with the interlude. The interlude is something I'd written that was originally unrelated to it, but I decided to add it in, so tell me what you think.

mattvl
12-15-2006, 09:51 PM
Very cool little piece. Reminds me of the old classical experiments in X Major/Minor. There is alot of repetition but at the same time it is a fairly long piece. Setting out a basic structure for it might help developing the piece as a whole but as it is I still think it's a neat bit of songwriting.