2nd Song I Wrote (Crit plx) [PTB, MIDI]


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Hallows_Eve
11-14-2006, 04:24 PM
It's a power metal/neo-classical, Angra and Yngwie Malmsteen influenced song. IMO, this is my best song-writting yet. Still working on this song, tho. Feedback?

Nightmare_xxx
11-14-2006, 04:43 PM
i like it, just one thning though, try and link the different parts of it together so it isnt just the same patter moved up and down. other than that it sounds good :)

Hallows_Eve
11-14-2006, 05:00 PM
i like it, just one thning though, try and link the different parts of it together so it isnt just the same patter moved up and down. other than that it sounds good :)

*confused* You're saying add variety to the riffs so they're not as repetitive right?

Thanx for the crit, btw :)

6_6_6_1_syn
11-14-2006, 10:42 PM
i could feel the Yngwie to it :D

Spark1284
11-14-2006, 11:37 PM
i love the chords under the intro melody part, but the second melody just gets annoying

Hallows_Eve
11-16-2006, 11:00 PM
How does the new 2nd melody sound?

Quik Axe Player
11-17-2006, 03:48 AM
It is way worse. All it is is a bunch of noise. Sorry, it just SUCKS

Hallows_Eve
11-17-2006, 01:14 PM
It is way worse. All it is is a bunch of noise. Sorry, it just SUCKS

The entire song or jsut the new 2nd melody?