Lottery of War


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Quik Axe Player
11-14-2006, 07:37 PM
Here's one of my songs put to music. It's the only the second one that I have put to music, so might be that great. IMO, I think it is better than the first one, because I have gotten better at writing music.

11-14-2006, 10:22 PM
i dont have powertab, how about a midi?

11-14-2006, 10:58 PM
The leads dont go with the rhytme and it sounds horribly out of tune with each other, the song gets very boring, and just sounds like alot of random powerchords with a crappy lead, sorry to sound so mean but i cant say very much nice about this, maybe try and turn down the rythme and get it into tune with the lead.

Quik Axe Player
11-15-2006, 07:20 PM
I will try and get a midi version of it.

P.S. Powertab is free and easy to download, so go do it.

Nunwhxre 666
11-15-2006, 08:16 PM
Wow. None of that went together at all. So dissonant. Next time try and make the two guitar parts fit together. Because like..none of those notes fit together. Beter luck next time, bro. =\

Could you crit mine if you get a chance? Links in sig.

Quik Axe Player
11-16-2006, 10:38 AM
OK, will crit yours. But, in my own defence, I think the verse is okay.

Nunwhxre 666
11-16-2006, 09:06 PM
The verse wasn't as dissonant as other parts, but it still isn't what I'd consider good

Quik Axe Player
11-17-2006, 12:04 AM
So, your saying keep the verse and get rid of everything else?

Nunwhxre 666
11-17-2006, 07:13 AM
No, keep everything. They're not bad riffs, they just don't fit together. Keep the leads, find different powerchords. Ones that won't clash with the leads.

11-17-2006, 07:45 AM
that is one of the worst song titles ive heard in a LONG time.

11-17-2006, 10:46 AM
i dunno, i really digged the intro. take out some dissonance and you got something there

Quik Axe Player
11-17-2006, 11:00 AM
Corn you have to read the lyrics to see why that's the name of the song.