One Of My Original Songs- Crit PLEASE!
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11-15-2006, 12:44 AM
Heres a song i made a long time ago.. would like some both Positive crit and negative if youcould find any lmao which im sure you will..as people always do! =)..
11-15-2006, 12:59 AM
it was ok
11-15-2006, 04:33 PM
i need crit! people!!!!!!!!
11-15-2006, 06:41 PM
The part after the chorus is great, but i think that the drums aren't really that great. They are out of rhythm with the guitars. But not a bad effort.
Crit mine? (http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=462170)
11-16-2006, 03:05 AM
I really don't like the rhythm guitar in the beginning. Some parts of the song really don't seem to sync up properly. The part after the chorus is definitely cool though. The song got better as it went on.
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