One Of My Original Songs- Crit PLEASE!


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varga88
11-15-2006, 12:44 AM
Heres a song i made a long time ago.. would like some both Positive crit and negative if youcould find any lmao which im sure you will..as people always do! =)..

Fender420
11-15-2006, 12:59 AM
it was ok

varga88
11-15-2006, 04:33 PM
i need crit! people!!!!!!!!

ShadowintheSun
11-15-2006, 06:41 PM
The part after the chorus is great, but i think that the drums aren't really that great. They are out of rhythm with the guitars. But not a bad effort.
5.5/10


Crit mine? (http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=462170)

Sarcasmo
11-16-2006, 03:05 AM
I really don't like the rhythm guitar in the beginning. Some parts of the song really don't seem to sync up properly. The part after the chorus is definitely cool though. The song got better as it went on.