Harmonialisering [GP5 + MIDI]


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psychotim
11-15-2006, 09:38 AM
Ok. My plan with this thing was to make some harmony stuff.
The solo probebly sucks couse thats something i just cant make yet.

Updated version on Post #9

GiantRaven
11-16-2006, 03:44 PM
Your harmonies sound cool dude :D

Don't really like the rhythm very much though

The solo is ace, nice use of the two guitars

Also, your Bassline is lacking

But very nice

Crit mine? (Link in sig)

ShadowintheSun
11-16-2006, 05:06 PM
I like this. i'm not too fond of the verse rhythm, but the chorus isn't bad.
You've done a lot better than u think with the solo, it ain't bad at all.
The bass needs a bit more action but it fits in quite well in my opinion.
7/10

psychotim
11-20-2006, 09:05 AM
The reason why the bass is lacking is becouse it just follows the rhytem guitar.
I just added it to make some depth in the song.
And yeah i guess the rhtem in the verse is a little repeatedly.
Cool you like my solo, its one of my first ones. im not in to modes and stuff yet so its kinda hard to make solos and make them fit with the rhytem guitar.

Welsh-Metal
11-24-2006, 03:31 PM
Yeah you did a good job with the solo, i like how sometimes the harmonies play off eachother, instead of just playing the notes at the same time.

You should really go and add some drums to this because it could be awesome. I would personally have your bassline really 'banging'. Like 8th notes throughout the bars or whatever, really get a strong rhythm going with it.

Good work though, i like it.

flyingsquirrel
12-01-2006, 10:19 PM
that's pretty good i say, some parts i dont like (cant tell im using the midi version) but i like it =) solo is perfect xD

culex-knight
12-02-2006, 08:30 PM
The harmonising is awesome.

SideLabel
12-04-2006, 07:16 AM
Indeed, as Culex said, it was awesome. Also cool to see another Norwegian on here. Sweet.

psychotim
12-04-2006, 11:55 AM
Thanks guys.

k, so i just fixed it a little bit.
Fixed a better bass line to it and changed the verse a little.
Tryed to add drums but that didnt turn out to good. so i layed that aside for a while.

And to SideLabel, yeah good to know that im not alone.

Bodomizer
12-12-2006, 04:44 PM
thats awesome man. i really liked it. sounded alot like in flames to me. the only suggestion i could give you is on the solo. theres a measure where you play
14-12-10-14-12-10-14-12-10-14-12-10 on the high e.. i would suggest changing that to something like

e-14-12-10-------------14-12-10-------------14-12-10-
b-------------13-12-10-------------13-12-10--------------

i think that sounds a little better.. but yeah.. thats the only little thing i would suggest changing.. so good job man.

face_haver
01-07-2007, 07:31 AM
Thanks for the feedback on my stuff man. I listened to your harmony song and the leads were pretty rad and solo wasn't too bad. Possibly work on the break and rythmn's and get some drums in there.