First Song Posted, Criticism Welcome [Midi/Ptb]


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ElBrutus
11-17-2006, 05:31 AM
This is one of the first songs I've written.. midi/ptb are attached. Thoughts, ideas, criticism are welcome :)

ElBrutus
11-17-2006, 05:32 AM
Would help if I attached the files I suppose :)

Hawker45
11-17-2006, 05:58 AM
If its one of your first songs its not to bad. When the Bm-A-D-G-Bm-A-G chord progression comes in it almost sounds a little formulated to me, like its been done before a million times, but other than that, a very sweet sounding song and well done. Nice solo too.
Crit my song if u want http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=468067

ShadowintheSun
11-17-2006, 08:44 AM
Really well put together. I agree with Hawker45, For one of your first songs it isn't bad at all. The rhythms are good and the solo is great. Nice work.
8/10

Nunwhxre 666
11-17-2006, 12:51 PM
Very well written for a first song. I absolutely loved the solo. Everything was really good. Except when the rhythm first comes in the intro. That chord progression sounds so generic. I loved the bass in measures 54 - 55. Overall about 8/10. Very good job on this.

If you get the chance, could you crit mine? Links insig.

Spark1284
11-17-2006, 02:33 PM
too modern for me, i love the chords that come in with the intro, cool solo, bar 37 power chords are not so fun, and the bass seems to trail off every now and then, and hit some off notes, overall i liked it but i think it needs more polishing

rodrigomierh
11-18-2006, 03:50 PM
I liked the chord progressions, nice rhytm, but i didnt liked how the intro solo ended, it just vanished into the song, everything else is alright . Good job