Bluesy rockish song (Ptab)


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death_monkee
11-17-2006, 06:41 PM
a song i made ....... because i wanted to bitch. crit 4 crit.

onebetter
11-17-2006, 06:47 PM
dude, I hope you realize that you're only allowed 2 tabs per week, read the rules.

Spark1284
11-18-2006, 07:24 PM
uhmm the intro was really cool, a little long tho, the electric guitar when it comes in should play something different and not just the same as the clean. the verse riffs were bad and oddly timed, the key changes didnt sound or feel right, and the chorus sounded like u tried to rip off frankenstein but forgot how it went. id say scrap all but the intro

KnownUnknown
11-18-2006, 07:34 PM
dude sorry but that is the wost song I've ever heard the into was ok but everything else sucked zombie balls

Nunwhxre 666
11-20-2006, 11:54 PM
Sorry, but that was pretty bad. The intro was cool where the muted electric came in. Other than that it was repetitive and boring. Sorry, bro.

But, if you get a chance, could you crit mine? Links in sig.