A new song.


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11-19-2006, 10:55 PM
This is my 3rd or 4th song that i've wrote. I really like it. I think it has a very progressive/melodeath style. I added drums to it.. but i dont like them at all.. so dont judge the song by that. And i forgot to add bass, but i'll add that later. So please let me know what you think. And crit 4 crit. thanks.

Captian Xero
11-19-2006, 11:25 PM
I like the riff in the intro... The Drums bring it down though... Unless you were going for grindcore... change the drums a little..

The riffs at 41-46 sound nice... the drums kill it...

That solo is insane... can you yourself play it?

The last note should have Resonated more.

11-20-2006, 03:48 PM
thanks for the crit man. and yea, i can play the solo. lol anymore crits?

Nunwhxre 666
11-20-2006, 04:46 PM
The intro riff is good. Then the drums kick in and it messes everything up. The riff after that is good. The drums aren't quite as bad, but still not good. I like the little harmonizing interlude thing. That was cool. The solo was really cool. Reminded me alot of Children of Bodom. Overall really good song. Just, scrap the drums.

If you get a chance, crit my latest (Folk Metal Guitar Peice) link in sig.