[Rock, GP5, MIDI] Star


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Albarranator
11-20-2006, 01:24 AM
Ok, I have been writing some songs and I belive this one is in the best. Also, I include formats in GP5 and MIDI, the lyrics are in inside the information of the score. Only the drums are missing. I will thank comments and suggestions. :D

UNIe
11-20-2006, 01:44 AM
Hm, well, I didn't like how the bass guitar was sounding and this song repeats quite a lot, vocal melody would really lighten things up, but other than that - it's cool :peace:

-Sidewinder-
11-20-2006, 02:37 AM
Some of it kinda reminds me of No Leaf Clover by Metallica
It was pretty good though

JCShark
11-20-2006, 01:21 PM
"He's Simple, He's Dumb, He's The Pilot" by Grandaddy on album 'The Sophtware Slump'
The riffs in your song sound incredibly similar to the intro

I wonder if you've ever heard it... :rolleyes:

Albarranator
11-20-2006, 10:13 PM
Oh, really, I havenīt heard that song, I will do it as quick as posible, thanks for the crits

Telestar
07-04-2007, 04:48 PM
Great stuff! I love all the sections titled "Riff". I dont know if anyone else hears it but some of the bass notes or something sound wrong (ie measure 46). I dont know if its supposed to be like that but it hurts my ears when i hear it. Anyway fantastic stuff! 8.5/10