n00b's metal intro (GP5)


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heartofblacknes
11-20-2006, 09:38 AM
Hey guys, just made a little intro to a metalish song and some feedback is appreciated.
This is the first time ive ever written anything so be nice and i know it sounds a little cliche. My main inspirations are Metallica, Megadeth and Iron Maiden.

cheers.

ShadowintheSun
11-20-2006, 12:56 PM
bish, bash, bosh, the end. U really need to add more to it. It's not bad but i can't crit it properly until u've expanded on it.