Winter Comp Rd 1 Grp 1


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DśmŲnika
11-25-2006, 11:15 AM
Brass wire spun leaves and metallic robin breasts,
[Christmas has never been the same since then.]

Polythene sentiment and plastic gifts,
[It was never the same since I left.]


Illusionary cards, entwined with its claim,
Gloss shining catalogues and LCD fame.
[Itís never been right since we paid]

Donít
Buy
Me
Anything
Donít
Ring
Me
Up
Donít
Wrap
My
Misery
Knives
You
Canít
Buy
Me
Love

Discarded toboggans play fool to the rain,
And drowned in the pool when the snow never came.

When the snow never came,
Christmas was lost;
ďCelebration LightsĒ blossom,
Hung up on the Mosque.



I See Icy Eyes At Sea

I see icy eyes at sea
The Snow Queen sailing on her ship of ice
The loyal Jack Frost standing at the helm
With the ocean freezing over
I turn towards the land

The wintry hills shine white and silver
A casket full of corpses leaves a great red streak
And all the villagers look to the Heavens in disdain
For the Icy Empress and her crew of cold-hearted fools
Are heading for the harbour
And slowly the village shall die

I see icy eyes at sea
Packs of White Wolves skate across from the Northern Lands
Praying by the shore, an old man and grandson

Under the frostbitten oak
I see icy eyes
I realise one man's fables
Can be all too true for some




Verse 1
yeah there they are, snowflakes falling, one by one
they seem so happy but in reality theyre not
so scared to be melt away by the hot fiery sun
it reminds me of our love before it started to rot

Verse 2
little kids outside screaming yay its snowin
running on the streets playing with their friends
parents sitting inside watching the happyness growing
happily wishing this moment never ends

CHORUS 1
so why dont we sit down and enjoy the snow
hold my hands, let me express my feelings
look at my eyes and feel the snow melting
just kiss my right now, feel my heart beating

Verse 3
snowflakes come together to form snow
kids have snow fights with it, its sweet
they play with it so innocent i know
but the laughs dissapear because of the heat

CHORUS 1
so why dont we sit down and enjoy the snow
hold my hand, let me express my feelings
look at my eyes and feel the snow melting
just kiss my right now, feel my heart beating

bridge
some people really like the winter season
it helps bring the family together
but while everyone else is loving each other
you still stay as cold as this weather.

Chorus 2
so why dont we sit down and enjoy the snow
lets hold hands, let me express my feelings
look at my eyes and let my love for you grow
just kiss my right now, feel my heart healing



As I open my eyes
I realise I didnít die
Although it feels that way

My blood has turned to ice
In this place there is no life
So why am I still here?

The cold sun blinds me
Piercing through winterís sorrow
The past behind me
You wonít be there tomorrow
Youíre lost in fire and Iím lost in ice
I canít reach you so whatís the point in life

I struggle through the snow
Although I donít know where to go
But someone has to pay

This hate is all I know
My cold heart wants to please your ghost
Iíll make them live in fear

The cold sun blinds me
Piercing through winterís sorrow
The past behind me
You wonít be there tomorrow
Youíre lost in fire and Iím lost in ice
I canít reach you so whatís the point in life
Thereís no point in life
They had to end your life
Why not mine

punchupatatigge
11-25-2006, 11:18 AM
Green.

caz_guitar_dude
11-25-2006, 12:31 PM
Undecided, and will edit in.


Edit: Dark red.

The Hurt Within
11-25-2006, 01:19 PM
Green hands down.

#1 synth
11-25-2006, 01:31 PM
though far from flawless, everything being relative, i gotta go with green.

*Truly Ninja*
11-25-2006, 02:21 PM
dark red

Jammydude44
11-25-2006, 04:25 PM
dark red

Alk 3 addict
11-25-2006, 05:26 PM
Green.

streetcarp19
11-25-2006, 09:46 PM
Green, though dark red needs some props, but it just wasn't my style.

Final
11-26-2006, 11:14 PM
Green caught my interest more than the others.

guitarsuperman2
11-30-2006, 02:25 PM
green fo sho

Phoebus
12-01-2006, 10:20 PM
green gets points for original presentation, loses them for a pretty unimpressive and uninspired rhyme scheme

dark red for me.