Winter Comp Rd1 Grp 2


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11-25-2006, 11:26 AM
Discarded for another
This has happened twice
What is wrong with what I have to offer?
Will it ever suffice?

Breaking in this early November
Is my crumpled heart
Cold Winter

As winter’s snow comes to get me
And drag it all into the dark

Cold is the winter wind
As it blows through a hollow me
It looked like fall will never end
But now a lonely winter is out to get me

Verse 2
She said she loved me
I was foolish to believe
That this could last forever
Women always do deceive


As the winter bites my face
In this godforsaken place
Memories engulf my mind
Of you and me and what magic happened here

The seasons changed
So did your heart
I pick up the pieces
And try to start but


Chorus ending
Cold is the winter wind
As it blows through a hollow me
Fall has officially ended
And now this lonely winter has claimed me

The Winter of our Discontent

Ice waves glaze the city streets
And blanket building walls
While children skid on box-top dreams
And memories of fall

While the night is biting frost
And the moon the bluest eye
Children dream of love long lost
And frozen tears do cry


I sit in a heated car
on a snowy evening

Observing snow melt as it approaches my gaze.
Observing me melt as I approach your gaze.
Observing you melt as you wish on an alabaster wall.
Observing me throw credit cards in a wishing well.
Observing you smoke to fill for the body heat you crave.
Observing smoke solidify into clouds over our eyes.



Hundreds of gleaming red eyes glare
Cowering from the unrelenting gaze
Yet shielded by swirling snow
Metamorphosing my life into a Monet
We sit in the pallid arms of snow
Wrapped in wrestless embrace

Breathe through grating iron teeth
Exhale smoke-like wisps which condense in mid-air
Concrete tongue catches wavering white confetti
These teenage lovers dance to the cadence of Christmas carols
Painting fragile lights upon bare brown skeletons
Breaking from concrete skin, grasping for the somber sky
The monotone eyes blink, green...yellow... then back to red...
Uncaptured by even the master painter's agile stroke

11-25-2006, 12:21 PM

The Hurt Within
11-25-2006, 01:21 PM
Between blue and pink...I'm holding for now.

So where are the rest....?

#1 synth
11-25-2006, 01:29 PM
pinkers para mi

11-25-2006, 04:26 PM
pink, just.

Yeh, where are the rest Michael?


EEDIT: And use proper colour names, it's easier for gods sake :D

11-25-2006, 05:50 PM
Others are tomorrow, because I said so in the sign-up thread. :p:

And Jamie...nah. :)

11-25-2006, 09:32 PM
The last one.....this is a landslide.

11-25-2006, 09:35 PM
Magical Magenta

*Truly Ninja*
11-25-2006, 10:56 PM

I really didn't like the others.

11-26-2006, 11:15 PM

11-30-2006, 01:31 PM
to tell u the truth, reading sum made me crave a cig which i havnt done in so long....but my vote goes to...magenta

Alk 3 addict
12-01-2006, 06:24 PM
Royal Blue. Thought it was the best, but hated the repetition of "observing."

12-01-2006, 10:22 PM

i really shoulda put more time into this comp. ehh.