Metal Song: Towards Thy Redemtion [GP5, MIDI]

[Albarranator]

Hey!!!

I have no crits in the other songs I have posted. I hope that this one will be crit. Well this one is more dark than my other songs, more powerfull riffs, incluiding acoustic parts... crit please, and give me the links of your songs, so I can crit them. Thank you.

[psychotim]

Ok i think it was boring and need some leads for sure.

And your transitions are to sudden.

And the Verse and pre-chorus is mysterious and evil sounding, while the chorus was all like happy sounding, and does derfor not fit.

And the second part of your solo is based on disonance.

[Nunwhxre 666]

That was really boring. Sorry, but I couldn't even listen to it all the way though. You really need to write some leads. Because the riffs aren't good enough to stand alone. 4/10 for the effort. Sorry, bro.

If you get a chance, could you crit mine? Links in sig.