[PT] Untitled (my first song ever)


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flyingsquirrel
12-01-2006, 10:08 PM
i know it kinda sux but its my first and i did that in like half an hour. Its far from being finished, and thats if i ever finish it.

plz dont be too hard on me :P

psychotim
12-01-2006, 10:15 PM
For being your first song this is pretty good if you ask me.

Hallows_Eve
12-01-2006, 10:26 PM
Not that bad for a first attempt, but not really original and got kinda boring. Lower the volume for the chords in the 2nd half of the song (they really overpower the 2nd guitar part). A decent job for a first piece, tho.

Btw, if you get the chance, return crit for my "Prog. Thrash Song" in my sig.

flyingsquirrel
12-01-2006, 10:33 PM
thx guys

and how do i lower de volume, do i have to like put another guitar for this part or whatever, i suk with powertab :P

edit: fixed it, managed to put a 3rd guitar at the right place

Hallows_Eve
12-01-2006, 10:42 PM
thx guys

and how do i lower de volume, do i have to like put another guitar for this part or whatever, i suk with powertab :P

Go to the bar where the chords start, then go to the "music symbols" list at the top of the screen and pick "dynamic" and lower the volume :)

flyingsquirrel
12-01-2006, 10:43 PM
ooo
thx for the advice, i just took a 3rd guitar :P but i guess thats simpler

Fallenblood
12-02-2006, 05:00 AM
Nice for a first try. You should really put in music bars where they belong, though.

flyingsquirrel
12-02-2006, 11:12 AM
yeah i forgot them, so ill fix that if i do a final version

cool#9
12-02-2006, 02:19 PM
Pretty good man, you've got some timing issues between the rhythem and clean notes but that doesn't take long to fix.

flyingsquirrel
12-02-2006, 03:04 PM
yea i did that, ill put the new version up soon, just need to finish the part im working on.
edit: i put up an updated version

rodrigomierh
12-02-2006, 11:20 PM
i like the progression but it gets repetitive, create another main riff like for the chorus,and also an intro solo would be nice. great job for first try.

beadhangingOne
12-04-2006, 12:24 AM
thx for the crit, here's yours

i think that what you have so far is a foundation. If you build off of it, youll have a pretty sick full-fledged song. Add a couple riffs, maybe a solo and it will be complete.

gj for what you have