[GP5 & MIDI]Metal song (my 2:ond)


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tabs aint cats
12-02-2006, 06:18 PM
ok so here's my second song(I finished this about 2 months ago)!
it's a melodic metal kinda song with an acoustic part in the middle.
i've listened to this song so much during the process of writing it i cant really hear if it's good or not lol!

i'd be happy to crit any of your songs!

PS
if you like this song i've got one thats alot better coming...

Fatt Sorum
12-03-2006, 12:28 AM
Ok, It's well written, and you're a lot better than some people here when it comes to writing drum tracks. The guitar work does not disappoint, and there's lots of variation within the song.

I think you should choose a different interval to harmonise with however.

Overall, 8/10

Crit mine? (in sig)

tabs aint cats
12-03-2006, 04:53 AM
oh yeah! when i listen to the harmonizing kinda sucks in this song (specially in the bridge) i'm alot better at it now.. cant wait to get my new song up here...