Sick Metal song {thrash?} (Ptab)


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death_monkee
12-08-2006, 12:30 AM
Heres a metal song i made...listen and shut up. crit 4 crit?!?!?! :devil:

Nunwhxre 666
12-08-2006, 07:12 AM
I didn't think it was that good. Alot of the riffs seem to boring, they have nothing to them. The guitar solo was fairly decent, but you need to put a rhythm behind it because it sounds pretty bland with just the solo playing. But, this could use alot of work. 5/10.

Crit one of mine if you have the chance? Links in sig.

psychotim
12-08-2006, 09:42 AM
Yeah you need some leads dude. and you could speed up the intro and add some 16.th notes too. And in the solo you have just put together lots of pieces that dont realy fit together.
Also add a bassline.

riffmasta93
12-08-2006, 06:25 PM
yea its eh... really boring

Burning_Angel
12-08-2006, 06:57 PM
Eh. Not "Sick Metal song".

Very very boring. I turned it off after 2 minutes and then listened to the solo. Couldnt stand that either.

Hallows_Eve
12-08-2006, 07:42 PM
The riffs sounded awkward, a lot of the times the wrong notes were played and it was very repetitive/generic.. The intro to the solo was really bad, but bars 73-74 of the solo were really good IMO (the only part of the song I actually liked).. The riffing (and the rest of the solo) really needs work, tho.

Crit my prog. thrash piece plx.

Spark1284
12-09-2006, 01:37 PM
keep working on it