Unfinished Metalcore riff.


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12-08-2006, 08:27 PM
this is somthing i came across just out of the blue. its a metalcore riff. that i decided to expand on... its not finished and it probably sux cuz its one of my first. so please crit and tell me how im doing.

12-08-2006, 08:59 PM
The beginning was okay, then it got kind of boring, but picked up again at about 25 seconds. Not bad, but could use some work.

12-08-2006, 10:55 PM
k thnx

12-08-2006, 11:45 PM
After I listened to the beginning part once or twice I really started to like it, the bass and guitar go really well together in the first bar, but other than that, it's some decent riffing. After the intro, the bass and guitar don't go together as well.

Crit my prog thrash piece if ya get the chance.