[PTB/MIDI]God of the Dead - Unfinished Metal Song


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12-13-2006, 07:45 AM
Hey guys, just thought I'd post something I've been working on for my band recently, I just need some input. As typical, this is a C4C affair, just post your link if you want me to crit yours.

Thanks heaps.


12-13-2006, 10:08 AM
The intro was good but you repet it to much.
And that bell section could have been good, but it just wasnt.
Then all your riffs after that are good, but in desperatly need for a bass.

12-13-2006, 12:04 PM
Like I said, unfinished. :)

The bell section probably won't be used when we actually play the song, though, but thanks for the crit.

Also, I'm leaving the bass as it is for now, as my bass player is incredible, and likes to write his own bass parts to what suits him. Which of your songs do you want me to crit? There's quite a few there. :haha

12-13-2006, 01:16 PM
Harmonialisering and Melodic Acoustic Piece have i gottn good crits on.
And Evil Mother ****er just suck i guese.
But i havent gottn any crits on Something bad is too and Daim Thats Good At 03.11
So i would be happy if you could crit them.

Yeah it is unfinished, i forgot. Anyways, good work so far.

12-13-2006, 05:18 PM
pretty decent, though a little repetitive


12-13-2006, 05:56 PM
everything before measure 22 was really horrible.
After that it was ok but too repetitive. Come up with some more variations.

12-14-2006, 12:03 AM
Thanks Mr. Eminem.

That wasn't very insightful and in depth, and this isn't progressive, so there's not much point for too much change.

Some of the greatest songs ever written are full of repitition, example, The Trooper.

But yeah, thanks for pointing out you know jack shit about music.