Metalcore Song (untitled and unfinished)


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12-13-2006, 09:23 PM
Ok this is somthin I put toghether over the last hour or so. Some of it i think is a bit iffy (chorus) Where the power chords and bend are) So i would like suggestions on that. And just lemme know if it is worth adding another guitar and bass. And c4c plz. thnx!

12-13-2006, 09:24 PM
It'd be helpful if there was a link. And wrong section, but whatever.

12-13-2006, 09:26 PM
k there. Sorry it wasnt working.

12-13-2006, 10:16 PM
I thought the song was sorta good but lacking some originality. There needs to be more variety in the guitar riffs but otherwise it was pretty good.

Crit mine please? (

12-13-2006, 10:29 PM
I personally didnt like it not to critisize or anything it didnt have any theme. like any good song should have.

12-14-2006, 04:46 PM
sorry i dont think it was very good. i would trash it and start something else

12-14-2006, 05:07 PM
Can you put up a MIDI?

12-15-2006, 11:01 PM
check out mine ive added more on to mine tonight..gonna b hard as hell to tab it out lol