Theme for a song


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12-13-2006, 10:34 PM
let me know what you think it's not completely finished... in fact a havent even made a dent. i'm hoping to make it alot longer sooner. and the end sucks, gonna change it

12-13-2006, 11:20 PM
well first off, MIDI would be nice. Second off, it sounded pretty awesome but the rhythm guitar was waaaaaaaaay too loud for my liking. Otherwise, it was great.

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12-14-2006, 12:24 AM
I personally don't like it.

Its not exatly my style. Beyond that It sounds like a bunch of scales.

It is not very intresting for a song and reminds me of some warmups I do before I play.

12-14-2006, 01:00 AM
Some of the chords are a little bit off. The intro was pretty awesome. Overall sounds kinda classically. It kind of went a bit downhill from about measure 32 onwards until about 40. Maybe adding a bass would be an interesting idea. And by major theme do you mean in a major key or important? If you mean major key it really sounds A minor-ish.

EDIT: If you wanna crit anything of mine, it would be awesome if it was "A song." which should be somewhere on the first page of the forum.