My First song [GP5]


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cusic
12-14-2006, 04:48 PM
Right, this is my first song ive only been playing 2/3 months so don't abuse me :P anyway this is the first song i wrote it's pretty sucky but I suck too :P

comments and criticism please. thanks.

magvol
12-14-2006, 04:58 PM
"file cannot be found"

magvol
12-14-2006, 04:59 PM
a good start, but a little to much the same

supersolus666
12-14-2006, 05:02 PM
thats pretty good but it is a little too repetitive give it a little more work