Hard Bluesy Riff [GP5]


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Saje
12-14-2006, 10:28 PM
My first real composition...it's still kind of a WIP...and yeah I know the drums suck but I'm really bad at tabbing percussion...and some of the transitions need a little cleaning up but I'm working on it.



But yeah, crit for a crit.

EDIT: Should work now

flyingjew34
12-14-2006, 10:38 PM
Hmm, I can't open it...

Saje
12-14-2006, 10:50 PM
Fixed now

sl1solo762
12-14-2006, 10:57 PM
its all there and isnt bad for first i guess.. i HATE how it sounds, just Gpro in general when you dont have RSE on.... even with RSE its annoying as hell.. make a real track with some thick a-- distortion and it should sound pretty killer

flyingjew34
12-14-2006, 11:12 PM
It's ok. But it's a little boring honestly. You just need to keep working at it I suppose. You'll get it. The main riff was pretty cool, but the other licks just need to be faster IMO to sound good.

Mongoose87
12-14-2006, 11:15 PM
I like the Rythm guitar better if it's Overdriven, instead of distorted.

Orrinmamedov
12-16-2006, 12:04 AM
sounds great keep it up man

D_y_p26
12-16-2006, 02:17 AM
nice, i love the bass line
the intro is sorta cheesy too me, but very very good for your first real composition