Slow Song (GP4)


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-Sidewinder-
12-15-2006, 09:01 PM
I decided to try somethin new, and make a slower kind of song. I usually go for metal stuff but I decided to give it a shot. Finished it today, have a listen. Everything is pretty basic.

mattvl
12-15-2006, 09:08 PM
What type of player do you use for this kind of song...

Trebuchet
12-15-2006, 09:10 PM
I think it's good! Make sure you post the finished results too.

Sum41Freek
12-15-2006, 10:25 PM
The intro sounds really good, almost reminds me of Pieces by Sum 41 for some reason. I don't really like the piano lead you wrote. The guitar solo is perfect for the song, but I don't like the sixteenth notes in bar 32. The pre-verse sounds cool, sombre and all that.

9/10. It jsut has these little nuisances that bug me. You've got an opprotunity for a lot of potential here, don't throw it away. This is DEFINATELY a step in the right direction.

Crit mine (in my sig)?

-Sidewinder-
12-16-2006, 05:33 PM
THanks for the crit...just finished it today so you can listen to the complete song.

~DrEaM ThEaTeR~
12-16-2006, 06:06 PM
yea sounds alot like pieces by sum 41 (at least the rythmn guitar) sounds great tho, good solo guitar