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g.a.r.r.y
12-16-2006, 08:12 AM
alright well im only pretty new at guitar and i made this not long ago so any crit would be appreciated

SonOfOsiris
12-16-2006, 08:36 AM
i cant play it itunes, real, or WMP...save it as something compatible with either of those and repost it

CorkHunter
12-16-2006, 08:55 AM
lololol its guitar pro dude

Stevie B
12-16-2006, 09:02 AM
sounds a bit messy and incomplete to me. Try working each of the guitar parts into one another and maybe add some bass and drums just to help it sound like its less jumpy.

MadMudgeN
12-16-2006, 09:06 AM
personally, I think it's kind of boring and trite; it just seems too much like all the stuff that's been done before. And I agree with Stevie, it sounds choppy and weird in some parts, but keep working on it. Please crit mine http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=485226

SonOfOsiris
12-16-2006, 10:30 AM
lololol its guitar pro dude

oh i dont have that never mind then, im sure its not that good anyway if youve just started (NO OFFENCE!)

g.a.r.r.y
12-16-2006, 11:00 PM
well yeah ive only just started writting songs and this is my first so thanks for the crit, i know its not great but i'll try some of your suggestions