Set Envy To Stun [GP5 + MIDI] Crit for Crit


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ĦBlah!
12-17-2006, 02:11 AM
I hope you guys like it. I'll Crit for crit.

And2001PT
12-17-2006, 09:11 AM
That was actually quite good, although I didn't like the unecessary single lead note in some measures, and the silence sounded really bad in some parts.
Overall, it was good, but it didnt really do anything to capture the listeners attetion.

Crit mine? ^^
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=485817

'StoleN'
12-17-2006, 12:43 PM
it was really eh. the only thing i liked was the chord progression. Right before chorus. You should come up with some better riffs. Use more chords. and dont do the same thing over and over again.

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MadMudgeN
12-17-2006, 07:45 PM
I find this very trite and tired. Sorry, but both the verse repeat way too much for my tastes cuz they both get old real fast and don't stop playing. The chorus is alright. Then the interlude is basically the same thing as the verses man! You should try expanding on the riff you've already written and don't be afraid to just try stuff; that way you can deviate some and still use all of the notes of the key and chords of the key you're in to make it way more interesting. 5/10 man. Crit Mine Please: http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=485226

GiantRaven
12-18-2006, 02:44 PM
Bit bland from what i've heard at the start, the lead just looks like a run up and down a scale...

The silences are annoying and repeated the verse 8 times just gets old

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NovemberRain273
12-18-2006, 03:46 PM
Hmmm a little bit repetive. The lead doesnt have any feel to it, it really seemed out of place and unnecessary. For the drums, try not to just follow whatever beat the guitar is playing, give it more variety. As for the riffs, not too bad. But true, repeating the verse 8 times is pretty boring.