C4C[gp, midi]Flying Free (muse-like song)
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12-17-2006, 09:08 AM
Heres something I came up with today. its pretty muse-ish due to the pianos and stuff, at least i think so.
Thanks for any crits :D
12-17-2006, 09:15 AM
I like it, I think it was cool how you used the synth and piano sounds.
IMO, they can set a mood much better than simple guitar riffs.
The solo wasn't nothing exceptional for the most part, but it had some cool moments.
Judging from measure 91, I can tell your an Hammet fan, eh? ^^
Actually, the only thing I didnt like is when the piano and strings go away and the guitar kicks in.. I think the riff is really uninspired.
Maybe work it a little bit, and you'd have a fine piece there ^^
Crit mine? ^^
12-17-2006, 10:37 AM
I thought it was pretty good but the distorted guitar was sorta unnesacary. The solo would be good awesome but not for this particular kind of song. Other than that, it sounded really nice and melodic.
Crit for Crit? (http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=7623114#post7623114)
12-17-2006, 07:39 PM
I also thought it was pretty good, but I think with your talent you could make a hell of a lot better chorus that would fit better and sound cooler with that song IMO. The chorus is the only part I don't really like. The solo is fantastic by the way; very much enjoyed that portion of the song. And the verse is cool. Just fix the chorus. 8/10 Crit mine please: http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=485226
12-18-2006, 02:50 PM
Your bassline is cool
The verse/chorus transition is very good, I liked that a lot
The solo was ok, sounded a bit...generic to be honest, the interlude afterwards is nice
Crit for Crit? (link in sig)
12-18-2006, 06:59 PM
I really liked it. Distorted guitar could use some tweaking, but everyone has thier opinions. Really liked the intro. Do you have words to go with it? I'd really like that.
Overall this is one of the better ones I've seen here at UG. I put it on my itunes....
12-20-2006, 07:15 PM
i really like this song. i thought the 2 pianos complimented each other and made some nice sounds. overall i think the whole song is good but where it lacks for me is the chorus. when the chorus first came in i thought it was really good but after several times of hearing the same 4 bars in the chorus, the chorus got boring quickly. so try and add more to the chorus to make it more exciting.
the solo flowed well and i liked the string ensemble at the interlude it fit the pianos perfectly and it was relaxing to hear that. personally id like the interlude to be extended as it was too short.
so well done that was a great song i liked it alot 8/10
could you crit mines please? :)
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