my first song (punk)


View Full Version : my first song (punk)

12-17-2006, 03:30 PM
this is the first song i have written. i did it pretty quickly and i'm not sure about the solo. please give any comments, crits, or ideas. thanks!

12-17-2006, 04:18 PM
im not seeing a solo anywhere... :confused:
and im not liking the ending of the song.

its not great... 6/10

crit mine? (

12-18-2006, 11:08 AM
i change the ending and got rid of the soloish part (if it was even that).

12-18-2006, 02:14 PM
I like the eastern style vibe at the start

The synth is also nice

Drum/Bass seems lacking though

Your lyrics are...ok...I can't really comment on them

The main synth line is very nice though...

All in all, it's ok, without the Synth bits it wouldn't be very good though

Crit for Crit? (Links in sig)