my first song (punk)


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PunkFan99
12-17-2006, 03:30 PM
this is the first song i have written. i did it pretty quickly and i'm not sure about the solo. please give any comments, crits, or ideas. thanks!

§tratocaster
12-17-2006, 04:18 PM
im not seeing a solo anywhere... :confused:
and im not liking the ending of the song.

its not great... 6/10


crit mine? (http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=465065)

PunkFan99
12-18-2006, 11:08 AM
i change the ending and got rid of the soloish part (if it was even that).

GiantRaven
12-18-2006, 02:14 PM
I like the eastern style vibe at the start

The synth is also nice

Drum/Bass seems lacking though

Your lyrics are...ok...I can't really comment on them

The main synth line is very nice though...


All in all, it's ok, without the Synth bits it wouldn't be very good though



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