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Misfits1234
12-21-2006, 01:21 AM
Its to go along with my lyrics from a song I call "family tree"

It's basically a punk song / beat so just keep that in mind.

so having said that, please, criticize. (my first whole written song) :liplick:

Riff
|D---------------------------|
|A-5-55-8-88-5-55-9-99|
|E-3-33-6-66-3-33-7-77|


Chorus Part 1
|D-77777777-55555555-77777777-33333333|
|A-55555555-33333333-55555555-11111111|
|E-------------------------------------------------------|

Chorus Part 2
|D-77777777-55555555-77777777-33333333--------|
|A-55555555-33333333-55555555-11111111-2-4-2|
|E-------------------------------------------------------------0-2-0|


Filler 1
|D---------------|
|A-5555-8888|
|E-3333-6666|

Filler 2
|D----------------8-8|
|A-5555-8888-6-6|
|E-3333-6666-----|


SOLO
|e-----------|
|B-2-5-2-5-|
|G-----------| 4x then

|e-----6-9-6------------------|
|B-6-9-------9-6-------------|
|G---------------9-6-h9b-6--|
|D----------------------------9|
|A------------------------------|
|E------------------------------|
-
Outro
|D----------------8-8-8-8-8-8-8------------------------------|
|A-5555-8888-5555-6-6-6-6-6-6-6-5--------------------|
|E-3333-6666-3333---------------3---3-h5-3-h5b\3p-0|



ORDER:

Filler 1 2x
Riff 6x
Chorus 4x
Filler 1 4x
Riff 4x
Chorus 4x
Solo 1x
Filler 1 6x
Chorus 2x
Filler 2 1x
Outro 1x

Albarranator
12-22-2006, 08:20 PM
Well maybe if you can put that in Power or Gutitar Pro Tab, I could make a good crit of your work

hardcoreatheist
12-22-2006, 09:04 PM
Bearing in mind that it's punk that's pretty decent. Fairly catchy, nice and simple, a great punk type song.

Misfits1234
12-23-2006, 12:30 AM
Well maybe if you can put that in Power or Gutitar Pro Tab, I could make a good crit of your work

ok, I'll get it all done tomorrow

Misfits1234
12-23-2006, 12:31 AM
Bearing in mind that it's punk that's pretty decent. Fairly catchy, nice and simple, a great punk type song.


thanks dude