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Bodomizer
12-21-2006, 04:13 PM
A new song that i really like. There are triplets out the wazoo. I'm not too proud of the solo.. so give me some advice for that. Crit4Crit of course. thanks.

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evening_crow
12-21-2006, 04:35 PM
triplets out the wazoo? it's all triplets! but i like it. some parts are slightly repetetive, but i like it.

psychotim
12-22-2006, 12:10 PM
Yeah its good, but try to make some new riffs.
You get kinda tierd of the intro riff after awhile.

And i loved the start of the solo, it was great.
But i didnt like thouse sweeps too much.
And at measure 63 you play some disonant stuff.
I like all of your 32. triplet stuff, thats great.
But the solo ended kinda sudden.
And it would be better with some bends in those slow parts.

But over all, its good.

Bodomizer
12-22-2006, 02:57 PM
thanks for the crit man. i tried some of the stuff you suggested and i like it better. more crits please.

damm_punks
12-23-2006, 07:32 PM
i dont know if id like it more if it had a diffrent tone
is that done on guitar on a computer or something because how did u get that dance music type tone?

im so sorry id never heard midi before and i thourought youd put a strange effect on your guitar
it sound quite good though

Evil_Magician
12-23-2006, 07:42 PM
It is slightly repetitive but nice riffage overal.
Some drums and bass would be nice.
And you should try adding some more riffs with a different feel and rythm.

Crit. mine plz.
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=7689166&posted=1#post7689166

Pure_Morning
12-24-2006, 10:16 AM
That was alright, liked the harmony solo, just stop it being so repetive...

Try different ways of harmonising? Diatonic thirds gets a little monotonous after awhile.